Look Down!

They were as scared as giant pandas. Two days ago Milhouse and Sideshow Bob were on the plane on the wing. They were safe until… one of the boys looked down and he said “Where am I, am I on a plane?” he was scared, but then he saw Sideshow Bob.

One hour later he looked down and saw a bomb. He had no food and no water. He had a heart attack. Sideshow Bob went to see Milhouse. He went to check his pocket to see if his fork was in there. Then he went to sleep and fell off the plane wing.

After that his friend got him back on the plane wing because he was about to fall off. Then his shoes and socks fell off the plane wing and fell to the ground. It was cold because his jacket broke. He had nothing. He saw a pair of socks in the plane and he was scared as he saw the bomb going as fast as a flash.

Next he found his bag and saw food. He was so happy but it had a timer. He was like a donkey that didn’t want to eat. He looked at the bag and the timer was finished and they ate it all and got special powers and they flew down. Then looking down and seeing that both of them were flying. He threw the bomb into space. But he exploded Mars.

He went home and he felt proud of himself for saving the plane.

Here is my narrative. Can you tell what the problem and solution are?